posted by James on 11/9/08
When I heard about the new 4-week photo challenge the Institute in Photographic Studies was offering, I quickly decided to join up! This continuing education opportunity is designed to keep the shooting pressure on for former IPS students by requiring the submission of one picture a day for one complete month (not including weekends). The benefit is that each picture will be reviewed and critiqued by a pro instructor, giving valuable feedback, encouragement, and direction! For those aspiring photographers reading our family blog, I am posting my submissions here in hope that you might also learn from the priceless insights of skilled critiquing.
Day 01: Leaf

It wasn’t too hard to find a colorful leaf. But this one, precariously yet trustingly resting upon the top of a lamppost, rose above the rest in singularity. I had to stand on the back of my companion to get the right vantage point.
Instructor Review and Critique: “I like how sharp this image is, as well as the way the color of the leaf is replicated in the tones of the background. Shifting your perspective higher definitely made this shot.
“Unfortunately, your subject (the leaf) isn’t what first attracts the viewer’s attention. The lamp is just a sharp as the leaf, but has the advantage of being a little brighter and resting on the third. This combination draws too much attention away from the leaf and ruins the effect.
“I’d recommend moving in closer and framing the shot with the leaf on the lower left-hand third and framing the background with the lamp. (This should place the leaf back into a stronger position and eliminate some distractions in the background.”
Day 02: Bicycle

Biking has always been an enjoyable pastime of mine. Bring along a camera, mix the warmth of Indian Summer with the color of Autumn-up-north, and you will find the emergence of the ultimate November photo shoot.
Instructor Review and Critique: “Cool shot. I really like the different/dangerous perspective you’ve captured! You’ve got great highlights and good shadow detail, but I’d like to see a little more saturation.
“You’ve cropped the front tire a bit tight and the shot is a little soft–lacking sharpness. I’m assuming the framing is limited by your lens options, but I would like to see you bring the camera a little
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